daily writing-7/30

the overall impression of our video was good, and most people thought it to be amusing. we need to improve our video quality and make sure that the "facebook on the Iphone" is visible. i think we did a complex subject, Even though ti sounds dumb, it is a serious thing that many teens and adults alike go through. i think we covered the Adeline pretty well, and the compositions were good. we are going to re-do our video and improve it.